A 'passive' exercise for Yanko
Hey Yanko,
How’s it going? I’m hoping that you read this blog because I’ve set you an exercise to do as a result of a grammar mistake in your last blog. Let’s take the bull by the horns and start with the language point for today.
‘Capoeira is a combination of dance, ritual and martial arts that developed by African slaves in Brazil the 16th century and nowadays represent a Afro-Brazilian culture and it’s teaching at Physical Education Class in the University’.
The first part of the sentence is a passive construction. Passive means the action of the verb is being done to the subject by someone or something else in the sentence so you need to use the correct form of the verb ‘to be’(is/was/have been etc) and the past participle so it should read ‘that was developed’.
Other corrections in the sentence are missing preposition ‘in the 16th century’, as ‘Afro’ begins with a vowel the article ‘an’ should precede it. Finally, ‘it’s teaching at...’ I’m not entirely sure what you mean but did you want to say ‘it is taught in the PE class at university’(another passive sentence Yanko)
As a short exercise in passive sentences, can you re-write the following active sentences in passive tense?
1) Bodyguards protect the rich and famous
2) Bad weather delayed our flight to Rome.
3) The cat chased the mouse
4) My brother organised the football game
5) The doctor examined my chest.
6) The gardener cut the lawn and trimmed the bushes.
7) Gloves protect your hands from the cold.
8) The child broke a glass vase.
Next a short reply to all the readers comments this week;
Pary from Iran, Raj, Leila, and Silwal Kishor thanks for your comments
Marcella, for a good summary of ‘1984’ by George Orwell, visit
www.bookrags.comand search for the book, then click on book summary.
Tiasha, nice to see you are back blogging, I was wondering what happened to you!
Ana Paula. Very astute comments about the meaning and significance of Animal Farm
Hyoshil, great that you are reading ‘Fahrenheit 451’, do give ‘Animal Farm’ a try in English, you might like it
Kuldeep, thanks for sharing info about dancing in your country
Adek, it’s called “Animal Farm’, this is just the farm name (it was first called Manor Farm when humans owned it), in grammar we could refer to it as the animal’s farm but as a title it has to be Animal Farm
Mercè, The Sky’s Ashes sounds interesting-maybe I’ll seek it out and read it for myself
Paulraj from India, what is it about the traditional dances in your country that you like? Thanks for the comments
Antonio from Lisbon-Portugal and Tanya and Merce the book is often used on English syllabuses and in English curriculums as it is considered a great modern classic by a famous author and is part of the English canon. It has surface and deep meaning, clever use of language, imagery, metaphor and serious underlying social comment. So it’s a text that student’s can really get their teeth into.
Nastya, hi there! You hit the nail on the head about me trying to juggle too many balls...!! Pigs in the book are not only authoritative but also manipulating, deceitful and self-serving!! Hope you enjoyed your 10 days with Alex. What are you doing now you’re not blogging?
Today, I’m just making a fleeting visit to the blog because I’m dead beat, pooped and worn-out(all synonyms for 'tired'!). I was burning the midnight oil last night, sweating and pulling my hair out over that essay I had to do. Finally at 1.46am, I sent the essay to my tutor and crawled into bed...ah relief-NOT because I was woken up by a screaming Teah at 4am who wanted milk and cuddles. So now I’m feeling the worse for wear and need to catch up on some ZZZ’s(sleep). I’ve been teaching all morning and now, Teah is napping so I’m going to get my head down for an hour. I’m hoping I’ll wake up refreshed and then I’ll be able to go out and about and enjoy a Saturday afternoon with my family (and a large glass of red wine tonight to celebrate another essay completed!)
Bye for now, have a great weekend everyone
Trudi
Vocabulary
take the bull by the horns face a difficulty and grapple with it
astute (adj) shrewd and intelligent
curriculum (n) courses of study offered at schools, universities etc
canon (n) a famous group of literary works
get your teeth into something to do something with energy and motivation
fleeting (adj) quick
burning the midnight oil staying up very late
pulling my hair out to be worried and anxious about something
the worse for wear tired from hard work
get my head down go to sleep
Comments
Hi dear Trudi ,How long we hadn't heard from you . I really mist you . I knew that you were busy with your essay . I 'm happy that you have done the Job ! I imagine your feeling after doing your responsibility ( how much it's sweet ). You are really brave to study when you have a toddler at your home . Some thing that that I couldn’t dare to do . I wish to find the books you introduced to us some day . I hope you have enjoyed from your essay complement celebration . By the way I couldn't see the fan dancer yet , could you please take a look at it for fixing it's error . Here are my answers to your home work : 1) The rich and famous are protected by bodyguards . 2 Our fight to Rome was delayed by bad weather . 3) The mouse was chased by The cat . 4) The football game was organized by my brother . 5) My chest was examined by the doctor . 6) The lawn was cut and The bushes was trimmed by the gardener . 7) Your hands are protected from the cold by gloves . 8) A glass vase was broken by the child . Have a nice weekend and enjoy yourself ( you deserve it )
Trudi, I see that you included a lot of expressions like " get my head down" or "pulling my hair out". Are they very common in coloquial english? I hope you can rest after finishing your essay. I suppose that in China next week is like any other labour week. Here in Uruguay the Holy Week has been transformed into Tourism Week, and another not christian names, but it is almost for everybody a holiday. Today the city is more quiet, and on Friday it will be almost empty.
Dear Trudi, I want to request you that some of sentences written by commentator are based on nice sentence structure but these contain minor mistakes unknowingly. If you can trace those sentences and give exercise to us to do correction, it will be beneficial to all of us. Certainly all of us are trying ourselves to boost up our language skills. Here is answer for exercise you have given. 1) Bodyguards protect the rich and famous –Rich and famous are protected by bodyguards. 2) Bad weather delayed our flight to Rome. Our flight to Rome was delayed by bad weather. 3) The cat chased the mouse. The mouse was chased by the cat. 4) My brother organised the football game. The football game was organised by my brother. 5) The doctor examined my chest. My chest was examined by the doctor. 6) The gardener cut the lawn and trimmed the bushes. The lawn was cut and the bushes were trimmed by gardener. 7) Gloves protect your hands from the cold. Your hands are protected from cold by gloves. 8) The child broke a glass vase. A glass vase is broken by the child.
Thank you Trudy for your advise. I have read 1984's summary on bookrags. It was very interesting and now I know the origin of the reality "Big Brother", isn't it? Have a good week end, bye.
Hi Trudi,how are you? here are the answers of the homework (The homework is answered!!!) 1) Rich and famous are protected by bodyguards 2) Our flight to Rome is delayed by bad weather. 3) The mouse is chased by the cat. 4) The football game is organised by my brother. 5)My chest is examined by the doctor . 6) The bushes are cut the lawn and trimmed by the gardener . 7)Your hands can be protected from the cold by gloves . 8) A glass vase is broken by the child .
Hi Trudi! I hope you could rest a bit on the afternoon. You´ve been busy like a bee recently :-). Have a nice weekend. Ana Paula.
Hi Trudi and everyone! I'm a faithful reader of this blogg but my English is not enough good for writing in it, so I only read and learn. Now, I'm writing just to say that we have in spanish an expression which means literally "take the bull by the horns" which is "coger el toro por los cuernos". Best regards. Ramón.
Hello Trudi, I'm really so sorry for not read your guidance. I didn't know about you and your support. I have not much time during the day because I'm in a hurry everytime and I can write only near at midnight. Because of this I've never accessed "The teacher Blogger". Actually I'm not perceive the link. I promise I'll read all of your guidance. About your last guidance I re-write the sentences. 1)The rich and famous is protected by Bodyguards. 2)Our flight to Rome was delayed by bad weather. 3)The mouse was chased by the cat. 4)Football game was organized by my brother. 5)My chest was examined by the doctor. 6)The lawn was cut and the bushes was trimmed by the gardener. 7)Your hands is protected from the cold by gloves. 8)The glass vase was broken by the child. I'll re-write the text with the right passive voice. About the PE: I want to say Capueira is so very much important for Brazil culture, because of this, PE in University create class to teach Capueira. I re-write this part using passive voice too. I have a doubt when you said missing preposition ‘in the 16th century’
Hi Trudi, this is exactly what I am doing at the moment - trying to get the passive voice into my brother's head. If he doesn't pass his English test tomorrow, he will be kicked out of university. Sad but true. You are right, when February came to an end it meant lots of spare time to me which otherwise would have been spent on blogging. For those who want to be a blogger – if you are very busy working or doing other things, you might want to consider starting writing your future blogs right now to save your time when you actually become a blogger! So what am I doing? I started going to the gym to get my muscles toned and strong :) And of course wedding preparations. In fact I am pretty bored… if you need help of any kind (moving your furniture or baby-sitting), I am always ready to lend a hand :) Nastya
Hi, Trudi! Hope you are well and have had a little rest this weekend. I was happier because the only thing which I have had to do was learning English. I spent my weekend with English books and their arms around each other (I don’t know can I say so?). I really want to pass my exam in June! I like your short review about Orwell’s books, especially the phrase about “clever use of language”: I really want to know what it is, so I am going to reread Orwell in English. I usually too lazy read serious books in language which I don’t know very well, so mostly I am reading Stephen King’s books and my favorite author Haruki Murakami. No, I am a liar, the last book which I have read was a criminal book of an American author. The book I had read before was Colum Mc Cann’s “Dancer”: it is about Rudy Nureyew, Russian ballet dancer. I am a fan of ballet, if anybody remembers. Tomorrow will be 17 March; it is the St. Patrick’s Day in Ireland. Old chap Patrick is the patron saint of Ireland. King Laoghaire was stunned once listening to an explanation of St. Patrick about the Trinity – three faces of God whish he had made with the help of shamrock. It has had three leaves just like God had three personals – The Father, The Son and The Holy Ghost. It is easy, isn’t it? So tomorrow all Ireland will be enjoying by an annual parade and to continue celebrating all week through. Irish people like celebrations. Me too. Sometimes. Have more rest, Trudi. Bye.
I'm glad to visit the blog for the first time. I found the BBC Learning English one anf monthts ago in the web. I'm professional Hang Gliding pilots in Rio. The fluent english speaking is very important for me! Thank you for good way to improve it!
Dear Trudi, I did the sentences which you give. 1) The rich and famous were protected by bodyguards. 2) Our flight was delayed to Rome by the bad weather. 3) The mouse was chased by the cat. 4) The football game was organised by my brother. 5) My chest was examined by the doctor. 6) The lawn was cut and the bushes was trimm by the gardener. 7) Your hands is protected from the cold by glovers. 8) a glass vase was broken by the child. I very like this blog. Which can improve my english. Thanks for your help. Sincerly, Jack Gao
Hi Trudi. I’m a new comer to blog section. I’v been enjoying of high quality BBCLE site for two and a half month only. BBCLE site in general turned out to be the most attractive way to learn English for me. I’ve attended Talk about English, Weekender, London life, People and places then, fortunately, I was lured by the banner to take a look at «what people writing about». As far as you know, banner’s shouting: ”Award winner”. That’s why I became one more student to absorb both colorful expressions and professional explanations. See you.
Hello Trudi :-) Thank you for your exercise on passive voice. I decided to take the bull by the horns and do it. I got my teeth into and rewrite the active sentences in passive tense. I'm not going to write my answers in the comment as some other students have just given the answers. With one exception that I found the most interesting (= most difficult) 'The lawn was cut and the bushes were trimmed by the gardener'. I’m not feeling the worse for wear but because I need some shut-eye, I'm not going to burn the midnight oil. Best wishes!
Hi Trudi, After submitting as assignment you must be a relieved woman now. I had these kinds of experiences when I was a student at the college. After my marriage I have never studied anything or written any assignment after 10.30. You are really a wonderful teacher and a committed student. My wife is a teacher in Physics. Sometimes I think about how difficult it would be to look after children, finishing the house work and preparing the lessons. I really hat off the women who are working as well as looking after the children. Sometimes my wife will burst out if I don’t help her to maintain house hold works. Do you have these kind experiences from your husband or will he always supportive when you badly need of his help.
it was a really good chance for me to recall some exercies of passive voice. Thanks a lot, Trudi.
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