Only for your eyes...
Hi Rachel and everyone...
I've just arrived after enjoying a lot in my village. Today, I have trucks and trucks of things to share with you. But, I have very little time to blog as my semester examinations are fast approaching. First of all, I'll share my love story with you...
Finally, it was in her hand. Her eyes were moving along the words. She did not know that it was written only for her eyes. I wasted nearly a hundred page note book to write that small piece of letter. I wasted nearly two hours of my valuable life to write that small piece of letter. And finally, it was in her hand. I did not know how I got the courage to do that. Slowly, I remembered our first meeting...
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It was my first day to the college ( intermediate studies). I was waiting at the bus stop. It was raining heavily and I was already late to the class. More over, I had to report in the hostel too. I was looking for the bus desperately and suddenly I felt the presence of an Angel beside me. I immediately turned to my right. She was beautiful. I looked at her eyes. They were charming. I was looking at her eyes when the bus came and she got into it. I was still looking at her...
I saw her the next day, that too, in my class.
"How lucky I'm" , I thought.
And from that day, I had been watching her. Days, weeks and months passed by. Still, I was just watching her...
But one day, I decided to propose her....
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She was still reading it. After a few minutes, she gave back the letter to me and told, " Sorry... I'm already in love with ....."
I was trembled... shocked...depressed....felt inferior to everyone...lost hopes on my life and finally... decided to end my life...
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I was on the terrace of my hostel. One inch front, and I would be no more. I became philosophical. I started thinking about my parents, my ambitions and ....the chicken pizza. It was in my room. I can't resist my temptation and so I went into my room and ate the pizza.
" And now, it's time to die", I thought.
I was going to the terrace when I suddenly saw her. She was beautiful...I haven't seen her till then. She was sitting in the visitors' room. Her eyes were charming...I think I fell in love with her....
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And, please don't ask about her. After that incident, somehow, I became a Universal lover... loving human kind.... After all, life is very small...
Satya...
Life is creative...
Comments
Well,Satya, I am speechless, it was worth to wait not only that few days you´ve deserved to enjoy your family. It won´t last long and we are going to hear about you, really, as a writer that´s clear! Until then I cross my fingers you obtain good exams results.
Long live the one who invented chicken pizza ,or else we would never have had the chance to meet the most humourous and witty student blogger who is an adept in story making..
I'd thought that so romantic stories as yours happen only in movies and books! Did you really want to end your life??
Hi Satya! I´m glad to know you enjoy very much your holidays. Wow! Your story is fantastic! Moreover, you wrote it very well. Congrats Satya! :-) Good luck with your exams, see ya, Ana Paula.
Hi Satya! Wellcome! I'm glad you are back...You said you were going on holiday for 4 days and then 4 became 7...(We've missed your stories a lot!) I hope you've had a great time with your family in your Village! I'm still waiting to know the name of your Village! No doubt that there is a writer inside you!...You add to the story the right dose of suspense, the description of every situation is very good, the comments on your feelings mixed with funny anecdotes are very originals...I've enjoyed your story very much! Good luck with your examns! Best Regards!
hi Satya,how romantic is your love story but really a sad ending. But, whose know you will meet someone who is more beautiful than her and in love with you so much...wish you all the best in your studies
I found a lot of interest when i was reading your love story. The core of the story is not special but the way you wrote it. You are not only good at English but also talent in writing story.
Hi Satya, you're back! Great! This is adorable story you told, I remembered my first love thanks to you :) Good luck in studies!
sorry friends..i'm writing comments to my own article. Actually, the story is a real one. Nothing in it is fictious. Only that, it was narrated in a fictious manner. And I 'm not feeling well today. So, I can't blog and this comment is to inform you about it... Bye.. Satya... Life is creative...
Hi Satya, it's good to know that you enjoyed your holidays. Good luck for your exams. Naheed
Hi Satya, It's a nice love story. It reminds me how I developem my love after my studies. But my wife was studying in the college. she was my neighbour. I had a attraction when I saw her first. Bus stand was one of our meeting point. Many many things. Any how you recoverd well, that's good. You have taken a life in a very positve way. We have more things to achieve. I like the way you narrate your love story. Good.
Im glad to hear that you are a Universal lover. So, you also love me,don't you? How nice!! (haha) sorry..Good luck with your examination. You must be sort of a person who like studying. That is a Universal lover!
Hello Satya, it's really a touching love story & I was really carried away by your story. But one thing I would like to advise you that it is not good to become despondent so easily by such trivial things. Anyway it's good that you recovered at the end.
Hi Satya, It's wonderful story. You are having good memory about her. Even though she did not accept your love, the time when you were falling in love with her was so precious time. Good luck!
hi satya. glad to see you. did you really end your life.? well before a friend told to me: whether you are happay or unhappay, you must learn chooes happay. because you must live in the world.
Satya, it's clear you are a poet and you know. Don't stop to put feels onto words, sure you'll get a great future as writer. Good luck
i think u have a romantic love.
Hi Satya, It is the first time I read your story and your blog. Congratulation! Your love story is so romantic and I wonder how the story ending. Good luck guy!
Hi Satya,you are so talented in writing. How she could reject a letter written by you
its a nice love story .it happen to everyone.but u share ur story.its great
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