My momeries - Travel
Hello, everyone,
How are you today?
I’m not very well because Stephen makes me under pressure that he corrected my blog to improve my English skills. I understand I’m not good to write and speak to English because I’m not English. I understand I have to take his advice on my writing, it needs rewriting. I know that I should be enjoyed writing the student blog for everyone who likes to read and learn from the BBC learning English.
That’s not problem he corrected my blog because it’s his responsibility.
Stephen, thank you so much for kind and helpful advice to me.
Stephen, you’re going to Mount Kilimanjaro in 5 weeks. Are you controlling your daily life to make good health for climbing? What’re you doing?
A friend of mine, she climbed to Mount Anapruna in Nepal. She climbed to Mount Jjri which the longest mountain range in Korea, is called Baekdudaegan, the hardest mountain to climb, height is 1915M. She’s also climbing other mountains for practicing regularly and jogging to hundred miles from her house everyday. She didn’t eat too much like you and controlled weight. The other problem is she had to comply with lack of air on the hillside. All her practices were sufficient for her before she left. She finally succeed in climbing. After she arrived in Seoul, she told me her secret that she met a man, now he’s her husband while she was climbing. He liked to get in touch with her continually because he fancied her at first sight. Can you imagine it’s happened to you? Hopefully, you would have. Do you believe first sight love? 
I have never tried to climb that mountain because I could be another heavy load for others. Last year I climbed several mountains with co-workers but they definitely agreed that I’m really bad for climbing.
I was hiking one of mountain at Mount Mont blanc in Chamonix, France. Have you been there? It’s really beautiful and lovely place to take holidays. I got the information from lonelyplanet which is very famous travel guide for traveler.
Most Korean visited to Interaken, Swiss while they’re traveling in Europe. They liked to see snowing country, Swiss but my visit was very fantastic choice to go Chamonix. I still feel that atmosphere which was impressed clean and fresh air.
I’ll tell you more stories about my travel and share what I was impressed.
Have a nice day!!
Comments
Hi,Soyoung cheer up and try not to get depressed the corrections which were given by stephen.I think you have a fantastic opotunity to improve your English and you have the best teacher who has committed himself to share his precious time and his interesting daily life.If i were you I would make the chance to the full.L am sure many students, who are studying English now, long for the chance and they would feel jelous of you.thank you for sending the wonderful pictures and have a good day !!
Hi soyoung, You must be very a good photographer. Many of our readers praised so much about the photographs of your sister’s children. Frankly, I didn’t look at carefully those photographs. I paid attention only on your writings. After I went through the comments of our readers and stephens blog, I noticed your photographs intentionally. Really great. You must have got the taste of taking photos. It’s really a gift. That’s what I believe. You can teach Stephen how to take photographs. He is always seeking help from Lucy for taking photographs. You put many questions to Stephen today. Stephens’s effort makes to workout. About love in first sight, I believe it. Some kind of attraction and attachment emerge when you find some on in the first sight. That makes to grow love.
Hello there :) As Hyoshil said, try not to get disappointed by the corrections Stephen makes. Instead, look at your previous blog entries and notice how much your english has improved since then. It's been great to read about you and your life in Korea, especially for us who are interested in cultures from all over the wrold. As for love at first sight, I do believe in it although I have never fell in love that way. Have a nice day, Miss!
Soyoung Lee, try not to worry. I think most of us readers can understand your limitations because we are also learning english. Of course, english is not your first language. To be honest, your blogs are really interesting that we cannot look at any error. You are creative and spontaneous. You are a brave girl. I would never had your courage to ask Sephan about some issues although they are sometimes in our female curious mind. So, I think you did us a great favour!
Hello Soyoung! There is no reason to be sad. You are doing well. Stephen is here to help you to improve your English, and you will see that in the end the results will be great. Regards.
Hi Soyoung, please keep writing! I'm your fun. Reading your sentences and seeing the beautiful pictures are quite pleasures. Wish you happy!
all is good soyoung images are nice and your memories are also nice .
Hi Soyong, don't be upset, you are very lucky to have Stephen corrected your gammar, for me, I just stay in front of the computer to learn from them. Your english is good, if you could take Stephen's advices, I believe that you would have great improvement on your English. Keep it up !!
Dear Soyoung, Thank to Ali how invited me to this blog it's my first time to read your articles. We had also some butifule mounts here in Iran. The highest one is Damavand Aprx. 5600 m and it is a nonnative volcano near our capital Tehran. I tried to climb it once but I couldn’t go more than 5200. It was really hard to breathe. I wish success for Stephen in Kilimanjaro and wait for photos from there. I’m eagerly witting for your next posts and Stephen’s comments for knowing you better and improving my English simultaneously.
Hi Soyong, you have great memories.
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