Poetry on the hoof

You may have noticed that there's a lot of poetic activity across the BBC at the moment and Radio 3 is no exception.
On the 21st of May the poet Ian McMillan joined Sara Mohr-Pietsch to encourage listeners to build a poem throughout the course of the programme. The fun started around 7 am when Ian put forward the first line for our 'Breakfast' poem. He also took an opportunity to create a new form: The Pietsch, the rhyming structure being ABABCC.
Well, once the challenge was thrown out there was little delay before the suggestions came flooding in via email, text-message and on Twitter.
Over the course of the morning we received over 600 suggestions for the poem.
Listen to the poem:
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Here's the poem as it evolved with the names of the creators next to the lines.
The Listeners' Poem Complete:
Ian's first line:
'I pull the curtains wide and feel the morning on my face'
Second line from Stuart Handysides:
'then stumble down the stairs to make the tea'
Third line from Barbara Rusbridge:
'the gush, the steam, the click, the clink, the ritual gathers pace'
Fourth line from Wendy Davies
'the phone rings and it's you it's you, I hear you telling me'
Fifth line from Jude:
'you are outside, but I am not washed or dressed'
Sixth line from ANON
'I pressed the buzzer, shut my eyes and you can guess the rest...
And without authors:
The Breakfast Poem
I pull the curtains wide and feel the morning on my face
Then stumble down the stairs to make the tea.
The gush, the steam, the click, the clink, the ritual gathers pace...
The phone rings, and it's you, it's you! I hear you telling me
You are outside, but I'm not washed or dressed.
I pressed the buzzer, shut my eyes and you can guess the rest...
We're hoping to repeat the experience very soon.
Listen to the daily poems commissioned by BBC Radio 3
Ian McMillan on why poems are perfect for chronicling big events.
Roland Taylor is Interactive Editor at Radio 3


Comment number 1.
At 06:15 6th Jun 2009, kleines c wrote:I suppose that we could continue Ian's poem over Breakfast this morning on your blog, Roland.
;)
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Comment number 2.
At 09:53 6th Jun 2009, kleines c wrote:"Where were you last night!
You stood me up all right!"
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Comment number 3.
At 10:11 6th Jun 2009, RolandTaylor wrote:Hello kleines c, not a bad idea at all. I like it!
So, with your line added it now becomes:
I pull the curtains wide and feel the morning on my face
Then stumble down the stairs to make the tea.
The gush, the steam, the click, the clink, the ritual gathers pace...
The phone rings, and it's you, it's you! I hear you telling me
You are outside, but I'm not washed or dressed.
I pressed the buzzer, shut my eyes and you can guess the rest...
Where were you last night! You stood me up all right!
(anyone else fancy adding more? I may have a go myself later) Roland.
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Comment number 4.
At 17:41 6th Jun 2009, timfarnhill wrote:I stayed up until three, until overcome with sleep
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Comment number 5.
At 18:14 7th Jun 2009, Rooooosta Sings....Cecil wrote:But luckily you are just a cyber friend,
Who cannot drive me around the bend....
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Comment number 6.
At 09:25 11th Jun 2009, alphajimart wrote:Where were the last night?
I was in the sky
but in my dream you aren´t with me
Where were the last night?
My dream is empty without you
Where are you today?
Best Wishes for a poem for breakfast ¡¡¡
Josefa Illán.Spain.
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Comment number 7.
At 09:28 14th Jun 2009, kleines c wrote:"I'm here, alpha', men,
On the b(l)og, women!
When will the great wen
Be more like a fen?
Get out of your den,
Without online 'zen',
And chime with 'Big Ben'!"
To what depths has Big Ian's Breakfast poem now descended on 'The Radio 3 Blog', Roland. Cheers, Suzy C (breakfast coffee)!
;)
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