Becky decides that rearranging the order of her sentences would form a much more sensible paragraph and make it flow a lot better. Having done this, her paragraph now looks like this:
As a business, the health club will be required to make a profit large enough to cover running costs, capital expenditure and wages. The location of the club will determine the market and size of the club. The number of pieces of apparatus will allow more members to use the gym. Adequate spacing between pieces of apparatus is also a safety consideration.
