Becky has written a sentence about each of the factors she identified as important.
LOCATION: The location of the club will determine the market and size of the club.
FACILITIES: The number of pieces of apparatus will allow more members to use the gym.
SAFETY: Adequate spacing between pieces of apparatus is also a safety consideration.
COST: As a business, the health club will be required to make a profit large enough to cover running costs, capital expenditure and wages.
Putting them together, her draft paragraph looks like this:
The location of the club will determine the market and size of the club. The number of pieces of apparatus will allow more members to use the gym. Adequate spacing between pieces of apparatus is also a safety consideration. As a business, the health club will be required to make a profit large enough to cover running costs, capital expenditure and wages.
