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The Perfect 10

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Paul Ashton|12:41 UK time, Friday, 28 November 2008

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Here's instalment two...

GET THE STORY GOING

Not getting the story going is a big problem with many of the scripts I have read. It's always hard to gauge just how much or little an audience really needs to know. It's hard to know the best point at which to start your story - and different people will disagree vociferously about this. But what I do think is this:

You need to know your story - and then be bold with it. By 'know your story', I mean know what it is you are trying to do, what effect you are trying to have on an audience. It often seems from their scripts that writers aren't sure, or perhaps just lack the faith to make a firm decision and go with it. But the clearer are about what you want the story to do, the easier it will be to know how to get the story going.

Hook the attention from the outset. Reel us in straight away. Don't wait. Yes, the kind and genre of story you are telling will determine the tone and manner in which you do this. But you still need to do it. The more multi-stranded your story, and the larger the cast of characters, the harder this will be. But FIVE DAYS is an excellent example where a TV serial opening very quietly but surely and deliberately draws you in through seemingly episodic but precisely chosen moments.

Hit the ground running. This doesn't mean start with an action sequence. It means, start your story on page one. It's often very useful and effective to cut straight into the action, to open in the middle of an event, conflict or moment.

And the best way to do this is to show characters in action. Again, not an action sequence. But actively being themselves, making decisions, being active - doing things. And doing small things is 'action' so long as they are significant things that express the character and feed into the story that follows.

Try not to consciously preface, set up or introduce the characters and world. If you are showing your characters in engaging action - whether it's a sitcom, feature film or radio drama - then we are getting to know your characters and world in the best way possible. But if you are easing us into the characters and world before or outside the action of the main story, then they just won't hook the attention so well.

Beware obvious exposition and backstory. This is, of course, easier said than done. But audiences are much more capable of piecing together information and going with the flow than we usually think. If it's important in the story, then it should come out in the story. Don't shoe-horn information in - find an action, conflict or incident that shows it.

And I look forward to seeing the debate that follows...

Midwifery

Abi|12:30 UK time, Tuesday, 25 November 2008

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I have helped two babies into this world, both in unusual circumstances, both babies hovered on the brink of life and death for a second whilst the viewers held their breath. A regular female character in Continuing Drama takes a huge risk by getting pregnant, the birth will not be straightforward.

A couple of weeks ago in Holby, Daisha gave birth in a lift with Joseph assisting. There was going to be a third person in that lift adding to the mix, a guest character with his own story, but he was axed by draft 2. Joseph and Daisha were to fly solo so that their intimacy could be better explored and the 'confessional' better exploited. It was I believe, the second 'birth in a lift' that Holby City Hospital has had (Casualty, unknown birth mother, Adam hyperventilating and Alice assisting). You'd think they'd place emergency birthing packs in there, or at least change the maintenance contractors by now.

The most natural thing when writing these birth scenes was to dip into my own birthing experiences - I've had two, both very different. (I'm sure it's harder for male writers, but then I've never had/performed open heart surgery but have written about it with confidence). The births of both my daughters were very straight forward in bog standard hospitals, but the timing of the various stages, the weird sensations, loss of control - I pulled on all that to add authority Daisha's experience in the lift. Mind you, I do not recall yowling in slow motion at the final push underscored by music, although I did have Bob Marley playing throughout both my births.

My Casualty birth mother was Maggie's daughter Joanne, caught short in a pub with a pissed Toby assisting. Again the baby hovered on the brink of life until Dixie gently rubbed some life into its tiny bones. Casualty is less underscored with musical interludes, but I did have a guest character put on the jukebox 'Sugar Baby Love' by the Rubettes as Joanne struggled with her labour. I can't remember whether this actually played in the episode, but it was in the script. I do have a tendency toward bathos in my music suggestions, which for some reason is often overlooked by directors - especially when it comes to the old Holby Montage.

Whilst Daisha was going through the rigors of birth with an OCD sufferer to hand, Michael Spence was dealing with dear old Gloria Rowlands who had mistaken him for her long dead GI husband. This episode was broadcast on 11th of Nov - Armistice Day and this was my nod to the hundred of stories that will have been remembered that week.

My final montage for this episode was in fact trimmed down (see previous post). I had wanted a final image of Gloria catching a glimpse of herself reflected in a window - the handsome 40's beauty she once was. Or, my editor was warming to my theme - "She could see Michael in his WW2 uniform in a brief trick of the light moment, just as she leaves the hospital.." Lovely! I added a small soft shoe shuffle for Michael in the stage directions as my montage music of choice was 'Come Dance With Me' by Sinatra - the lyrics reflecting the struggles of all the other stories of the day.

Wasn't to be.

I'm holding out for a Frank Ifield track on this current Holby I'm writing.

The script is coming along apace - I'm at executive draft stage and am (as ever) awaiting notes. This has been a very challenging episode scheduling - wise, with requests to bend the space-time continuum in various forms, not least going to 'night' earlier in the script than planned because although the episode airs in the spring, it's shot in January and light for filming will be different, or absent. I haven't fully understood this - my editor has had to explain it all several times and ... I'm still not sure I have grasped the concept.

It's the end of the world as we know it (and I feel fine...)

Piers Beckley|16:01 UK time, Monday, 24 November 2008

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New scripts! Yay!

Survivors episode 1, and Caligari are now available for download in the script archive.

You can also read interviews with Adrian Hodges and Gaby Chiappe to find out more about Survivors, while Sue Roberts and Amanda Dalton talk about Caligari.

And talking about scripts, Warner Bros have put the script for The Dark Knight online.

All well worth a read.

The Perfect 10

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Paul Ashton|09:38 UK time, Friday, 21 November 2008

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Writersroom's Unsolicited Roadshows are rolling across the country - but for those of you who aren't able to make it along, I'm rolling out our 'Perfect 10' session in ten weekly blogs (5 before Christmas, 5 after). To get your work read seriously, you need to hook the attention of the reader in the first 10 pages - and there are 10 crucial areas you need to think about.

Here's session one:

First of all, you need to KNOW your medium and format. If it's visual (TV, film), use pictures. If it's acoustic (radio), use sound. It sounds obvious - but it's often the case that we don't quite know what medium a script is for, and it's often the case that writers use visual directions in a radio script or make their TV script read like a stage play.

You need to CHOOSE THE RIGHT FORM for your story - not vice versa. When you have what you feel is a good idea, ask yourself these questions: What's the best place for this story to come to life? Which medium will best express the story you want to tell?

A script is a BLUEPRINT for a subsequent production process in which writers will not necessarily be heavily involved. A drama or comedy script has no literary merit or value in its own right. A script is there to be MADE.

SAY WHAT YOU MEAN. A reader can only go by what's in your script, so if there is something you want to say, say it clearly in dramatic/comic action. Writers sometimes say 'your reader didn't understand what my script was about'. But often it's that the writer hasn't been clear.

ONLY WRITE WHAT AN ACTOR CAN SHOW. Parentheses in the script where the writer explains the characters backstory, feelings and opinions are pointless. If there's something you need to express, then show it through the action and dialogue - through what an actor can play.

DON'T DIRECT FROM THE PAGE. Unless you are a writer-director, it's better to keep technical directions to a minimum. We don't need to know it's a tracking shot, dolly shot or smash cut - write the beats of what happens in the action of a scene, and leave the directorial stuff to the director.

When you know the medium and form, make us ENGAGE WITH THE FORM - and see if you can explore, challenge and subvert it. It takes practice and craft to master a form - if a writer can do that and then take it to the next level, they are the kind of writer in which producers will be interested.

So be INTELLIGENT. Be BOLD. And above all, be CLEAR.



If you have any questions on this session, i'll try to answer them over the coming week before session 2 goes up.

Survivors

Piers Beckley|12:25 UK time, Thursday, 20 November 2008

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A new series of Survivors starts this Sunday on BBC1.

Based on the novel by Terry Nation (which was, itself, based on the 70s TV series also created by Nation), Survivors is the story of the few who live after a virus kills most of the people on Earth.

(That's not really a spoiler... the clue's in the title.)

Anyways, we've got an interview with series recreator Adrian Hodges just up on the website.

You might also want to check out our earlier interview with Gaby Chiappe, where she talks about writing for the series.

And on Monday, we'll be putting up the script for the first episode. So if you want to read along as you watch to find out the difference between script and screen, either record the episode on Sunday, or check it out on iPlayer, where it'll be available for seven days after broadcast.

(mad scientists and all that jazz)

Piers Beckley|12:41 UK time, Wednesday, 19 November 2008

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The BBC Archive has just put online some documents about the creation of Doctor Who.

Starting with an inquiry into whether the BBC should make Science Fiction dramas, the paper trail then starts to go through various configurations for a series, before settling on the ideas still in use today.

It's a fascinating look at how a drama evolves from first concepts (What are we trying to do?) to the creation of a series.

Read about the creation of Doctor Who here.

The College on Tour

Micheal Jacob|10:18 UK time, Tuesday, 18 November 2008

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So last week the College went to Manchester and had fun, despite the weather living up to the Manchester cliche of dark, cold and drizzly. Further entertainment was provided by a group of WWE wrestlers on tour who were staying in our hotel, and were pursued by some quite alarming fans - overweight, massively pierced, and obsessive. Although the Kevlar vests recommended by Aspie Boy were unnecessary, one day I found a bullet outside the hotel, and the next day I found a discarded black bra with large green spots. Make of that what you will.

We began the week with a visit from Jon Mountague, who established the BBC's Comedy North and is now its executive producer. Jon talked about his past career, which involved working with some, um, large personalities including Alan Davies, Danny Baker, Jo Brand and Dale Winton, before setting up shop in Manchester. The unit has been responsible for I'm with Stupid, The Visit, Massive, Scallywagga, and co-produces Ideal with Baby Cow. A new series of Scallywagga has been commissioned, as well as a series from We are Klang! and a series of Admin, and the unit is working on web content as well as planning for a potential series of low-cost pilots.

We looked at the pilot of Spacehopper, which became Scallywagga the series, and discussed what changes were made and why. As expected, they were a mixture of thoughts from the commissioner and channel, and analysis from the production team,which led to some re-casting, a new stylistic focus, and more young characters at the expense of older ones to fit the brief of BBC3. Further adjustments are expected in the second series, highlighting the fact that television series evolve.

The writers then embarked on their project for the week - re-storylining and re-writing scenes for a problem first draft of an established audience sitcom. At our summer workshop, the writers had asked for this one to have a practical element, so for some of the time they became a team, with me as sort of guide and sort of writers' assistant, trying to avoid giving away the solution that the production found for the episode.

It was an interesting and, as it developed, demanding experience, which if nothing else demonstrated that solving problems with a team is just as hard as solving them by oneself. The solution that the production chose actually hovered in the air before disappearing, but the analysis was good and the rewriting was enjoyable. Watching the finished episode was illuminating, and the consensus - though hardly earth-shattering - was that mainstream sitcom isn't as easy as it looks. Given more time, I think the group would have come up with a valid and entertaining alternative solution.

We had a surgery session, when the writers talked about how their original ideas were coming on and problems they were facing, which resulted in some useful suggestions. One good thing about the college is that it's not competitive, so people are happy to chip in ideas rather than guarding them in case someone else wins.

Then we had a visit from a winner, the Manchester-based writer Danny Peak, who came top in the Sitcom Talent competition of 2002 with his show The Bunk Bed Boys. Having won a competition in 1992, Danny worked on scripts without success until Talent, a remarkable example of keeping faith with your ambitions. Since 2002, he has written episodes of a number of shows, including Two Pints, My Hero and My Parents are Aliens, until being asked to write I'm with Stupid, and then gaining a commission this year for a BBC1 sitcom, Big Top as well as writing on Not Going Out.

Danny is a big P G Wodehouse fan, keeps a shelf of published scripts, and as a book for writers recommends Bird by Bird, by Anne Lamott.

Our third visitor was the Brighton-based psychotherapist and writer, Loretta Riordan, who did a fascinating session on the psychology of character, having endured a difficult train journey with many diversions and a coach full of drunken QPR fans on their way to defeat by Manchester United. (Arsenal's young guns triumphed over Wigan that night, though the senior Unreliables failed to follow suit against Aston Villa on Saturday).

Beginning with Freud's analysis of humour and jokes, continuing with Jung's archetypes, moving on to Adler's adoption of humour as a therapeutic tool, and advising avoidance of websites which talk about enneagrams and personality scales, Loretta instead recommended delving into the literature of transactional analysis as a useful tool for writers devising characters (the foriginator of TA, Eric Berne, has an entertaining book called Games People Play), and not least looking into oneself by keeping a journal and doing 'free writing' - essentially thinking of a character or topic and writing for no more than ten minutes without thinking. Then take the most important thought, express it in a sentence, and free write again.

As parting exercises, Loretta invited us to think of the person in our lives to whom we had felt the strongest negative response and to work out why, and to say without reflecting what our favourte fairy stories were (there was one confusion when someone picked Rumplestiltskin when meaning Rapunzel, doubtless Freudian in some sense).

There wasn't time to analyse this in Manchester, but I've been thinking about my choice of Sleeping Beauty. Am I the Prince or Beauty (in the spiritual sense, obviously)? Thinking about that made me think about aspects of myself and before I knew it I had invented two viable characters. So, as I heard no one say in Manchester, think on.



Event Horizon

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Piers Beckley|17:34 UK time, Monday, 10 November 2008

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Just a quick note to say that we've got a couple of events coming up you might want to know about.

On the 20th November, Sarah Daniels and Kwame Kwei-Armah will be talking about Radio Drama in London.

And meanwhile we're continuing to add dates to our roadshows - the currently confirmed dates are

  • Manchester - 26 November 2008
  • Cardiff - 3 December 2008
  • Brighton - 4 December 2008

And there'll be more in the new year.

At the roadshows you can bring along your script and hand it to us in person, so you'll know we've got it.

So if you want to come along to any of them book your place here.

Russell T Davies Interview

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Piers Beckley|15:28 UK time, Thursday, 6 November 2008

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Just a quick post to say we've got an interview with Doctor Who showrunner Russell T Davies on the website.

It's really good.