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Sharps residential

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Paul Ashton|13:14 UK time, Monday, 18 August 2008

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We took the ten successful Sharps writers away for a week at the end of July. They turned out to be a fantastic group and are now off developing ideas that will soon become scripts. But why not hear what happened from one of the attendees, Paul Horsman (with another to follow soon). And here's the ten writers that were selected:

Paul Horsman

Terri-Ann Brumby

Ronnie Mackintosh

Emer Gillespie

Ken Wright

Gulshana Chouduri

Alex Reynolds

Lydia Mulvey

Bernard O'Toole

Nicola Jones

Writersroom talent on awards shortlist

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Paul Ashton|11:53 UK time, Monday, 18 August 2008

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The Tinniswood and Imison radio awards shortlists have been announced for 2008, and we're delighted to see writers and work developed through writersroom are on there. For the Tinniswood, Mark Ravenhill's Yesterday an Incident Occurred was produced by Kate Rowland for the Free Thinking Festival/Radio 3, while Mike Bartlett was first spotted through our unsolicited system. And for the Imison, Stephen Riley's The Birth and Death of Daylight was picked up through our unsolicited system and subsequently produced, while Jack Thorne's Left at the Angel and Laurence Wilson's Tin Man were both developed after they were selected for our 'Sparks' radio scheme in 2006. Fingers crossed we'll have some winners to celebrate when the results are announced in October...

The College goes to Edinburgh

Micheal Jacob|15:17 UK time, Friday, 15 August 2008

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Going to the fringe in Edinburgh means drinking to much, talking too much, not eating enough, and not having nearly enough sleep. Here, in chronological order, are the comedy shows I saw in a visit short enough to avoid serious liver damage.

I was told that I would love Ben Moor, and I did. A wonderfully witty, literate and ingenious writer, with a compellingly stylised stage presence, his show - Not Everything is Significant - is a meditation on memory and fallibility in a narrative about a biographer who one day finds a diary for the following year with the entries filled in, though only until a date in September. It's a fascinating piece with far too many epigrammatic lines to remember, which is why it's good news that this show, with his previous scripts, is going to be published next April. The idea of a chain of pubs themed after J G Ballard novels is genius.

A sense of fallibility also runs through Zoe Gardner's Fault, in which the gifted and luminous comedian and actress confronts 'Zoe Gardner's' insecurities and explores the nature of performance and the voice inside your head that tells you you're rubbish as both a human being and a performer. It's a show which puts vulnerability on the line but still manages to be extremely funny, particularly in the inspired character of a child inviting members of the audience to a party while desperately wanting them to choose sandwiches rather than cake.

Cake and insecurity also feature in Kitten Brides, where the wonderful Maeve Higgins, a young Irish woman from Cobh, talks with apparent artlessness about her cat, her family, loneliness in a foreign country, and her weight. It's the artlessness that disguises art because, at the end, her themes come together and reveal the structure that has been there all along. And someone in the audience is given a cake that Maeve has baked to take home with them (upside-down pineapple on the night I saw her). I shouted too late.

Aspiration is the twin of insecurity, and aspiration is the theme of Isy Suttie's delightful The Suttie Show, which deals with dreams - her own, those of her friends, and those of four characters. Amy Winehouse's country cousin wants to be a musical health and safety campaigner, Melodie the hairdresser from Liverpool wants not just any bloke, Billy enters endless talent shows, and Mr Mississippi would just like to get a lady into bed. With her engaging mix of autobiography, observation and songs, Isy provides a memorable show, packed with warmth and laughter, and ending in an affirmative singalong to make even the grumpiest join in with a smile.

Watson and Oliver don't have a theme in their self-titled show, apart from referencing James Bond, first in a sketch where John Barry and John Williams have a musical face-off, and then at the end when they canter hilariously through the Bond films. Along the way there is a poignant love story between a matador and his bull. Watson and Oliver have worked together for a while, and it shows in their confidence and energy, and in their ability to improvise when something goes mildly awry. Like Isy, Ingrid and Lorna have a warmth which makes the audience complicit rather than spectators.

A newer sketch grouping, the Boom Jennies, are three young and promising women with a distinctive style and a well-presented show in Shindig. Their characters are often people who misunderstand, delude themselves or get themselves into situations better avoided, and it will be interesting to see how their career develops. Worth keeping an eye on.

Keeping her eyes on the stars (sorry) is Helen Keen with her wonderfully titled It IS Rocket Science which, as the title suggests, deals with space travel, mixed with some autobiography and a few puns. Assisted by her writing partner Miriam Underhill with lighting and shadow puppetry, Helen's hugely endearing show features a number of home-made props and some fascinating history as well as big laughs. She seems guileless but, like Maeve Higgins, has a lot of guile going on.

Winning and eccentric also describes Tom Bell, whose free show in a packed pub back room considers what it's like to be 27, The Age of Rockstar Death. With the audience encouraged to play with paints, vote for their favourite wife of King Henry the Eighth, and back Tom as he sings an angry song that he wrote when he was 16, one never quite knows what's coming next, except that whatever comes next is going to be funny.

Demonstrating his versatility, Tom also features as Tommy in Tommy and The Weeks (Ed being The Weeks). Their Powershow is a brilliantly constructed conceit in which Ed has created an autonomous show that first runs itself, then turns vicious. The hour is stuffed with comic inspiration - Ed going online with his guitar and singing e-mails, Tom offering a telephone advice service to celebrities, the pair having a nap halfway through - and, like Watson and Oliver, the benefits of being an established partnership pay off in real style. Their contrasting personalities - Ed confident, wanting to be in charge but not quite achieving it; Tom will o' the wispy but with a backbone - make them a double act of real authority and style. They're not like any other double act, but they feel in the classic mould.

Anyone been up and seen something they liked?

"FBCs U's and E's" by Abi Bown.

Abi|11:38 UK time, Friday, 15 August 2008

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So what do you make of the new Holby City trailers currently running on the Beeb?

I sat open mouthed the first time I saw them. My daughter offered 'Very Ugly Betty' in her dismissive teenage manner but I could tell she was impressed. Sadly no Elliot in a thong however...

After I'd managed to close my gobsmacked gob, I made a Note To Self - so this is how the producers see the show.

Of course some friends and family have asked glibly, 'Why don't they get the makers of the trailers to produce the episodes? We'd watch it then...'

When I tell people I write for continuing drama, I can usually predict how the rest of the conversation will go. Devotees of the programmes are delighted and usually know more about the shows than I do. Cynics inevitably throw up ER, Greys, often The Sopranos but always The Wire. Everybody it seems, loves the Wire. I wind up these conversations asserting that yes, I too enjoy American dramas, but we have to work to with what we've got - an 8pm watershed, and a British way of doing things. Vive la difference.

Sure we'd all like to write like David Simon, but as a writer friend pointed out the other week, our scripts are nit combed for expletives and dark humour and god forbid we take our central characters/heroes to such dark places that we risk losing audience empathy... And yet don't we all love the psychotic Tony Soprano, serial killing Dexter, House? Maybe we should give Charlie a crack habit and have him wreak revenge on NHS timewasters in an overt yet beautifully filmed bloodfest ... and we would love him more.

Personally I'm counting the days til the next instalment of Mad Men. It's a question of taste after all - and whilst I was happily transported to the streets of Baltimore with the homeys exploring urban life and the sociological battle that ensued vis a vis the effect of institutions on the individual - you can't beat the sheer joy that is the frocks on Mad Men.

Maybe it's a girl thang. During the Writers Academy training days we watched and deconstructed a fair number of TV shows. Academy Boss asked for my opinion on Life On Mars at one point and I think my reply was, 'It's a bit blokey.'

Well in my defence, it is - nowt wrong in that.

One thing I did love about the Wire, was watching the show and waiting for the 'title' of that particular episode to be spoken by one of the characters. It was always a very satisfying moment.

I've hit a real blind spot, it's not writers block as such, I'm not battling with huge story problems or re-drafts, but I am in creative pain. I can't find a title for my latest Holby City.

The episode is in the can, filmed over the past few weeks and soon they'll be wanting a title. I've posted before on this blog how episode titles usually make themselves known to me by the time I've written the treatment.

I've offered a few - but my editor has come back with, 'Might have to dig a bit deeper on the title,' and 'I've run it past the Producer and we might need another push on the title..'

I guess the problem is - finding a suitable title that encompasses all the themes in the episode ie: all 3 storylines. In my frustration I even took my daughter's advice and found a 'title generating' website - her mates use them for band names. It came up with suggestions like "Atomic Elliot and The Explicit Tree" and "Purely Holby and the Junk" (honest).

So now I am going to take a leaf out of The Wire, read through my Holby script and find the essential spoken line that sums up the episode ... and use that.

From writersroom to M I High

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Paul Ashton|09:37 UK time, Friday, 15 August 2008

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Take a look at our new web feature by Keith Brumpton about how his CBBC series M I High came about. After entering a writersroom competition and being shortlisted, he was invited on to a CBBC scheme that set the ball rolling towards a successful show that is about to shoot a third series... You can also read one of Keith's scripts from M I High.

On The Fringe

Piers Beckley|14:51 UK time, Thursday, 7 August 2008

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The Edinburgh International Festival (and its associated fringe) begin tomorrow.

Every year we send someone to watch plays by newcomers in order to find new writing talent. But the Edinburgh Festival's a big place, and we're a small department.

So, if you're up at the festival and you see something magnificent that you think we should know about, can you let us know the name of the play and the name of the writer in the comments section?

We can't promise to send anyone to look at it - but we want to make sure that if there's new writing talent out there that we can help, we know about them.

New Scripts

Piers Beckley|16:47 UK time, Wednesday, 6 August 2008

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I've just uploaded a couple of new scripts into our Script Archive.

White Girl is by Abi Morgan and was transmitted as part of BBC2's White Season in March this year.

Damned, Damned, Damned is by Frank Cottrell Boyce and is part of his series of Friday Plays, One Chord Wonders, currently transmitting on Radio 4.

They're both excellent. Go on, have a read.