500 Words 2023: read a finalist's story from the 8 - 11 category

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Picturesque Pakistan by Yasir K.

Once upon a time in the bustling city of Lahore, I, Ahmed, an 11-year-old boy, lived in a world filled with endless adventures and dreams. The dusty streets and vibrant markets of my neighbourhood were my playground, and each day held the promise of new discoveries.My mornings began with the sweet aroma of my mother's parathas sizzling in the pan, and the sound of the muezzin's call to prayer echoed through the air. I would race to get dressed and head to the local school, my backpack bouncing with anticipation. School was a place of wonder, where I learned about our rich history, from the Mughal emperors to our struggle for independence.

In the heart of Lahore, our neighbourhood was a tapestry of cultures and colours. The tantalizing scent of biryani from street vendors would draw us in, and we'd savor every mouthful, our tongues tingling with spice. The festivals and celebrations were a whirlwind of music and dancing, and we'd join in the festivities with joy. These experiences taught me the beauty of diversity and the strength of unity, making my childhood in Pakistan even more special.My best friend, Ali, and I were inseparable. We would embark on wild adventures through the narrow alleyways, pretending we were explorers in a dense jungle. Our imaginations knew no bounds, and every dusty corner held the possibility of hidden treasure. Sometimes, we'd even sneak into the ancient mosque's courtyard, marvelling at its grandeur and feeling a sense of reverence.Weekends were our favourite time of the week. We'd gather in the nearby cricket ground with a group of friends. It was more than just a game; it was a passion that bound us together. The sound of leather on willow, the shouts of "Howzat!" and the laughter in the scorching sun made it all worth it. We'd dream of representing Pakistan in international matches, just like our heroes.Amidst all the fun, there was a sense of responsibility instilled by my parents. My father, a hardworking shopkeeper, taught me the value of honesty and hard work. He would often take me to his small store, where I learned to count money and greet customers with a smile. It was there that I understood the importance of earning an honest living.One evening, as the sun set behind the Badshahi Mosque, I gazed at its magnificent domes and minarets. My heart swelled with pride for my beautiful country, Pakistan. The stories of our ancestors and the dreams of our future filled me with hope. I knew that one day, I would contribute to its greatness in my own way, just like all the other children growing up in this remarkable land.As I lay in bed that night, I closed my eyes, eager to explore more of the world, to learn, and to play with my friends. Each day was an adventure, and I could not wait to see what the future held for a young boy like me in Pakistan.

Listen to 'Picturesque Pakistan' read by Gavi Singh Chera from the BBC Radio Drama Company.

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