Title: Holly Holmes in Swimming into Danger
by Holly from Derbyshire | in writing, fiction, short stories
Holly Holmes stood with her feet firmly planted as the other girl rushed towards her. As the girl reached out, Holly pulled her forward and rolled backwards, sending the girl flying. She landed with a thud and Holly sprung to her feet, brushing her light brown hair back off her face.
Holly then broke out laughing.
âBeth, are you OKâ?
âI ache in places I didnât know I hadâ said Hollyâs best friend Beth Marshall.
âExcellent, Hollyâ said her judo instructor, but I think Beth may have had enough for one nightâ.
The pretty 16 year old schoolgirl sleuth reached down to help her friend back to her feet.
As Holly returned home, her mum was sat on the couch with a lady Holly did not recognise.
âHi, honey,â said her mum, âthis is Ann Wells, the mother of the girl who has disappearedâ. The news papers had been full of a young swimmer who had suddenly vanished.
âI have heard so much about you, Holly, I wondered if you may be able to help find Robyn, my daughterâ.
âI really think itâs a case for the policeâ said Holly
âThey are looking into it, of courseâ, said Ann, âhowever, I thought you may be able to look round the gym where Robyn was last seen â pleaseâ, she almost pleaded.
Holly looked at her mum, âOK, I guess keeping fit and sleuthing may be funâ.
The next day, Holly and Beth arrived at the gym.
âI donât know how I got talked into thisâ said Beth. Holly smiled at her friend.
After a brief tour, the two friends got changed.
Holly was surprised when she entered the gym, there where so many bright outfits and heavily made up young women it felt more like a fashion show.
After half and hour on the exercise bike and rowing machine Holly said âReady for a swim, Bethâ
âReady for a lay down, more likeâ gasped Beth.
The girls changed into their swim suits and as they were leaving the changing room a girl bumped into Holly.
âClumsyâ the girl said to Holly. Although Holly was sure she wasnât to blame she apologised anyhow.
âYou are Holly Holmes, the girl sleuth, arenât youâ said the girl
Holly confirmed that she was.
âThereâs nothing here for you to poke your nose intoâ
âYou donât know Robyn Wells, I supposeâ said Holly
âOf courseâ said the girl âeveryone does, sheâs a good swimmerâ.
Holly then lowered herself into the pool.
After swimming a few lengths, Holly pulled herself out of the pool.
âPretty good, Hollyâ it was the girl who had bumped into her, ânow watch a real swimmerâ.
The girl dived in and swam effortlessly.
âSheâs pretty goodâ said a girl to Holly, her name is Laura West, âsheâs great at athletics and tennis too â oh and judo and karateâ.
âCome on, Holâ said Beth âlets go to the café, Darren supposed to be meeting us rememberâ
Holly remembered her other best friend, Darren Carter has said he would join the girlâs for a coffee.
âGosh, Iâd forgotten about thatâ said Holly.
âHolly, you are hopeless sometimeâ said Beth.
âI just want to spend 10 minute in the saunaâ said Holly
âMust look you best for Darrenâ giggled Beth and Holly felt herself blush crimson.
Holly entered the sauna and laid her towel out, the room was empty. As Holly wondered if the girl Laura was anything to do with Robynâs disappearance, fingers outside the sauna were adjusting the temperature override. The gauge was turned until the temperature needle moved into a red zone marked DANGER. Then a cane was jammed through the handle of the sauna, to ensure it would not open!
Inside, Holly noticed the temperature rising. She walked over to where the temperature was showing â DANGER â it was far too hot. Holly tried to adjust it but it would not budge. Holly began to feel light-headed and made her way to the door. It was jammed!
Holly wasnât prone to panic, but this time she did. She screamed out loud but no one heard
'Must notâ¦.letâ¦.myselfâ¦â¦ faintâ thought Holly blearily.
However, the heat grew more and more intense and objects in the sauna began to swim before Hollyâs eyes.
Finally, totally overcome by the heat, Holly fainted and fell limp to the floor of the sauna!
Meanwhile, in the café, Darren had arrived and sat with Beth.
âHolly will be here soon, she is just making herself beautiful for youâ said Beth, âactually, she should be here by now, I am going to see what sheâs fooling about atâ.
When Beth reached the sauna, she noticed the indicator on DANGER. Then she looked through the window and was horrified to see Holly stretched on the floor.
The heat had obviously caused Holly to faint and she was obviously unconscious or worse!
Beth yelled for an attendant and soon Hollyâs limp form was carried out of the sauna. Her normally perfect skin was speckled with bright pink marks.
The attendant carried Holly to the emergency room, while Beth went to get Darren.
When the two friends got back to the emergency room, Holly was still unconscious, attendants were running ice packs across her skin to try and cool her down.
âHow is sheâ said Darren
âNot good, I am afraid, we have rung for an ambulanceâ.
âAMBULANCEâ yelled Beth, than began crying.
Just at that moment, Hollyâs eyes began to open.
She saw Darrenâs face and managed a smile âWhere am Iâ said Holly.
âStill at the gym, you got trapped in the Sauna and faintedâ Darren told Holly.
âThey are taking you to hospitalâ cried Beth.
âPlease let myâ¦.mumâ¦..andâ¦â¦dadâ¦.â Hollyâs voice trailed off.
Then the teen sleuthâs eyeâs closed and her head lolled to one side.
Still very weak from her experience, Holly fainted and lapsed back to unconsciousness!
A few minutes later, Hollyâs limp form was placed on a stretcher and carried to the waiting ambulance.
As they left the gym, they passed Laura West.
âWhat happened to Hollyâ she said âhas she overdone itâ
Her tone was almost mocking.
âShe got trapped in the sauna and someone fooled with the temperature. Holly passed-outâ, said Beth âI donât suppose you know anything about itâ.
Laura shook her head.
Later that evening, Holly was feeling much better. Her mum, dad, Beth and Darren were sat round her bed. Usually, her parents let Holly have free reign when solving mysteries, however this time her dad said â Holly, I really think you ought to give this case a miss, if Beth had not found you when she didâ¦well, you could have been in the emergency ward nowâ.
âDad, I am fine and I am sure Laura West has something to do with this â can we go homeâ
âYou are being kept in overnight for observationâ said her dad
Holly frowned âbut dadâ
However, there was no argument. Her parents and friend hugged her and Holly slipped beneath the sheets. Before they had left the room, Holly had fallen fast asleep.
After a good nights rest, Holly was released from hospital and went home.
Although her mum and dad were reluctant to let her continue with the case, Holly convinced them that she was sure the disappearance of Robyn was something to do with Laura.
On that basis, her parents let her continue if she took care.
Later that day, Holly returned to the gym and spoke to the swimming instructor, who confirmed there had been a lot of rivalry between Robyn and Laura.
âLaura has always had her own way, her parents have even bought her an apartment of her own in town, but she could never get the better of Robyn in a raceâ said the instructor.
âIf you need to check, all the records are in a room upstairsâ.
The trainer took Holly upstairs and Holly thumbed her way through the records.
The trainer was right. Laura could never beat Robyn.
Now convinced Laura knew something about Robynâs disappearance, Holly made to go back down stairs. However, as she reached the top of the stairs, two hands shoved the teen sleuth firmly in the back.
She grabbed at the rail at the side of the stairs but could not hold on.
Holly fell headlong down stairs until she crashed on her back at the bottom.
Holly forced herself up to her elbows, but black fingers of unconsciousness began to drag her back to the floor.
The light above her, then the whole room began to spin out of control.
That was the last thing she remembered for some time.
Next moment Holly fainted and slipped into unconsciousness!
When she regained consciousness, Holly was lying face down on a sofa. As she began to stir, she heard a voice she recognised speaking from what seemed far away, âWelcome back, Holly, you have been out for quite a whileâ.
Holly eventually came to a sitting position.
It was Laura West. âYou really are too nosy for your own good Miss Super Sleuthâ Laura laughed, âyou never know you might even solve the case if you can stay conscious for more than a few hours at a timeâ mocked Laura.
âI suppose you have Robyn here somewhereâ said Holly.
âOf courseâ said Laura âI could never beat her in the pool and she is standing in the way of me being chosen for England â and no one does thatâ!
âHowever, as you have paid a visit, Miss Holmes, I will at least introduce youâ.
With that Holly suddenly lashed out with her right foot, catching Laura a painful blow in the knee, then stood up and pushed out with her right leg against Laura, shoving her back across the roomâ.
However, Laura quickly recovered and pushed Holly back against a wall.
âYou will pay for that, Hollyâ, said Laura.
Laura then drew back her arm and hit Holly on the neck with the side of her hand, delivering the perfect knock-out chop.
There was a moment of unbearable pain and red and black spots danced before Hollyâs eyes. Then she began to fall.
That was the moment that Holly fainted!
Laura smiled to herself as she lifted Hollyâs unconscious body and carried it to the back of the room. There she unlocked a door and carried Holly in.
âRobyn, you have a visitorâ and dropped Hollyâs body onto a thin mattress.
âHolly Holmesâ said Robyn recognising Hollyâs face from pictures she had seen in the papers âwhat have you done to herâ.
âSheâs come to rescue you, apparently, but I canât allow that so I am afraid I have had to knock Holly Holmes unconsciousâ laughed Laura.
Holly Holmes eyes began to flutter open. For a moment she wondered where she was, then she saw a face looking down at her.
âRobynâ? said Holly.
âYesâ replied Robyn âthank goodness you are waking upâ.
Holly vaguely remembered struggling with Laura before Laura had used a karate move to knock Holly unconscious.
âWe must try and escapeâ said Holly, âwho knows what she has in store for usâ.
âHowâ said Robyn.
Holly had an idea, she would pretend to be still unconscious and Robyn could get Laura into the room by saying she was worried Holly was badly hurt, then Holly could surprise Laura.
âIt sounds dangerousâ said Laura.
âYesâ said Holly, âbut we must tryâ.
Before the girls put their plan into action, Holly used her special watch, which was also a small radio, to contact Beth.
âHolly, where on Earth are youâ said Beth.
âIn Lauraâs apartment with Robyn, Laura knocked me out and kidnapped meâ said Holly âbut we have a plan, can you let the police know whatâs happeningâ
Beth said she would then the girlâs put their plan into action.
Holly lay back on the mattress and closed her eyes.
Robyn put her mouth to the door.
âHolly is still unconscious, I think she may be badly hurt, please come and lookâ.
Laura walked into the room and looked down at Holly. Laura gave Holly a sharp kick in the ribs and Holly had to stifle a moan. Then Laura bent down to take a closer look and Holly took her chance.
She suddenly grabbed Laura by the wrists and pulled her forward, placing her foot in Lauraâs stomach, Holly sent the girl head over heels, just as she had done with Beth in the judo class.
However, this was not Beth. Laura jumped to her feet and approached Holly, who was still in a sitting position. Lauraâs face was full of rage.
As she approached, Holly kicked out with her right leg, catching Laura behind the knee and sending her crashing to the floor.
As Laura lay winded, Holly pinned her to the floor, holding onto her wrists.
The girls then heard police sirens. Laura tried desperately to escape, but Holly hung on, determined not to let Laura escape.
Moments later the police entered and took Laura away and Holly and Robyn were free.
A couple of days later, there was a knock on the door of Hollyâs house and her mum let in Robyn and her mum.
âWe are so grateful to you, Holly and want to give you a rewardâ.
âThatâs really kindâ said Holly, âbut I donât want a reward, I just love helping out and solving mysteriesâ.
So another case was solved but Holly was certain it would not be long before she was up to her neck in her next mystery.
Holly Holmes is a pretty, intelligent 16 year old schoolgirl who has a knack for solving mysteries. Her best friends are Beth Marshall and Darren Carter. When a swimmer on the verge of being selected for England disappears, the girls mother asks Holly to help find her. Holly is soon plunged into her most dangerous case yet and just as she has almost solved it, Holly is knocked unconscious and kidnapped. Can Holly free both herself and the missing girl?



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